Bluxky Quest — Sketch Outline

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Chapter One

OZZY FOREST

Pages 5–12 · Arrival · Floris · Grand Pa Tree · 10-Day Warning

p.5

Ozzy Forest Arrival

Comic · Art done

DRAWN

🌳 Wide arrival — forest, portal gone

Bluxky face-down on ground

Looks up — forest all around

"You hit the ground before you knew you were falling…"

p.7

Character Sheet — Skills

Reference · Art mostly done

DRAWN

TITLE: CHARACTER SHEET

Graffiti · Observe · Climb & Hide

Tagging · Throw Up · 🔒 WildStyle

Text boxes only — drop copy in, done.

p.8

Graffiti Rune A–Z Chart

Reference · Drawn, not coloured

WIP

TITLE: GRAFFITI RUNE

A–Z grid (26 letters, 4–5 cols)
Plain letter + wild-style version each cell

Note: "Use this chart throughout"

⚠️ Nail these pairs first: B/D · F/P · I/L · U/V · S/Z

BREWSTER letters critical (Spirit Notes game)

p.9

Floris Encounter

Comic · 6 panels · Fully coloured

DRAWN

P1: Bluxky hears sound · "?"

P2: Finds Floris · Rune speech

P3 WIDE: FUME! — pink spray cloud · Bluxky hit

P4: "I can understand you!"

P5: Distant sound · "…ooohhh…"

⭐ KEY BEAT: P4 speech bubble changes Rune → English

P6 wide: Two silhouettes walk toward sound

p.10

Grand Pa Tree — First Sight

Comic · 1 panel · Fully coloured

DRAWN

FULL PAGE: Bluxky arrives. Grand Pa Tree crying. Shroomies biting roots. No words — silence is the power.

"What happened to you?"

"Something ancient. Something in pain. And it's looking right at you."

p.11

Grand Pa Tree + 10-Day Warning

Comic · 5 panels · Pencil sketch

WIP

P1 WIDE: Grand Pa Tree introduces himself

P2: "Is there a way back?"

P3: Shroomies chomp · Wizard backstory

P4 ⭐ STAKES: "Ten days. Without a tether you will fade." → "Aight aight aight."

P5 small: Wizard silhouette — pink hat, staff, robes (faint, memory)

⭐ P2 — Bluxky asks about home FIRST so P4 stakes land correctly

p.12

Quest Begins — Splash

Splash · ✅ ART DONE

✅ DONE

FULL PAGE ✓ Bluxky running · Grand Pa Tree behind · Floris left · Shroomies right

"Day 1. Ten days. One missing Wizard. Zero idea where to start."

"Aight. Quest on."

⚡ Text only needed — do NOT redraw

Chapter Two

THE FOREST PATH

Pages 13–28 · Blobby → Chef Grub → Ingredient Hunt → The Mine

p.13

Blobby at the Intersection

Comic · 5 panels + Quest Box · Ink sketch

WIP

P1: Bluxky meets Blobby

P2: Blobby → Chef Grub

P3: Broken bridge · "Heartwood Build"

P4: Valley below · "Say less."

P5 QUEST BOX: 6 items illustrated · full colour · checkboxes + quantities

River Stone ×2 · Muddy Bloomer ×2 · Firefly Cores ×4 · Rune Hammer ×1 · Giant Pipe Bones ×4 · Iron Root ×1

p.14

Hidden Objects — Valley

Game · Full page · ✅ Art done

✅ DONE

FULL PAGE ✓ Riverbank hidden objects · 14 items across 6 types

FIND BLOBBY'S BRIDGE PARTS! — use list from page 13

p.15

Chef Grub's Camp

Comic · 7 panels

TODO

P1: Bridge fixed! Blobby proud

P2: Cross bridge · camp smoke ahead

P3 WIDE: Camp chaos — soup pot, miners, Chef Grub

P4: Miners · STARVING!

P5: "…But first."

P6: Monster eating food from mine · GROOOAN

P7: The deal — 8 ingredients for Wizard info

⚠️ GAP: Bluxky reaction to camp chaos (P3) — fill later

p.16

Goblin Recipe Scroll

Reference · ✅ Done

✅ DONE

COMPLETE — no action needed ✓

p.17–24

Ingredient Hunt — #1–8 of 8

Game · 8 full illustrations

TODO

p.17
FLUXXEGG
Moonlit Mushroom Grove

p.18
CURSECAP
Twisty Root Garden

p.19
INKERRY
Sparkle Berry Cliff

p.20
FANGHERB
Bubble Bog Swamp

p.21
SKULLIC
Lantern Bug Hollow

p.22
SLIMBUTT
Echo Corn Cavern

p.23
FIRESPIKE
Moldy Root Cellar

p.24
SKYSALT
Storm Nest Ridge ⭐

Each page: ingredient OBJECT hidden + ingredient NAME in Graffiti Rune · Players find both + decode with p.8

Format: TITLE BAR · LOCATION · Full illustration · Instruction strip · Answer box

p.24 SKYSALT = showpiece. Make it the most dramatic of the 8.

p.25

Chef Grub Breaks His Hand

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1: All 8 returned · Chef Grub erupts

P2: Chef Grub climbs branch in triumph

P3: CREAAAK… bird shifts

P4: CRACK! CRASH! Bird flies slowly 🐦

P5: Sling. "It is merely my cooking hand."

P6: "…burned instant noodles." "PERFECT."

Comedy timing is everything. P4 bird reaction = gold. Don't rush it.

p.26

Cooking Crossword

Game · ✅ Done

✅ DONE

COMPLETE — no action needed ✓

p.27

Everyone Feasts + Into the Mine

Comic · 5 panels

TODO

P1: "MORE STIRRING."

P2: Feast · miners happy

P3: Miners march to mine

P4: Chef Grub whispers: mine passage

P5 WIDE: Bluxky alone at mine entrance · GROOOAN from inside

"Here we go."

p.28

Connect the Dots — Mine Monster

Game · Full page

TODO

Dark mine tunnel. Numbered candle-flame dots form Rumble's silhouette when connected. Bluxky + miners on left with lanterns, nervous. 30–50 dots.

⚠️ Connected shape must look round/soft/HARMLESS — reveal on p.29 is that Rumble is just hungry

Chapter Three

PLATYPUS BARRACK + ROOT WALL

Pages 29–38 · Mine Climax → Barrack → Inn → Swamp → Root Wall

p.29

Rumble Revealed + Dig the Way Out

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1 WIDE: Rumble revealed — round, soft, big eyes, adorable

P2: GROOOOAAAAN · "That's a hungry growl."

P3: Rumble sad, embarrassed (no words)

P4: Bluxky feeds Rumble stew · MRRRUMBLE! · lights up

P5: Exit blocked by boulders · "We'll dig from the sides!"

P6: Tunnel opens to daylight · "New friend. New path."

⭐ Act 3 opener. Mine climax + world-shift to the Barrack. P3 pure visual.

p.30

Out of the Cave — Platypus Barrack Arrival

Comic · 5 panels

TODO

P1 WIDE: Cave mouth · "What is THAT?" · Castle town across river · sign: → PLATYPUS BARRACK

P2: Goblin Miner: "Trading post. Everyone passes through."

P3: Gate · RULES board · "BE PATIENT OR BE SOUP"

P4: Password whispers — Noodle-7 CLUNK · Mossy-boat CLUNK · Dripdrop ✓ · Plum-Jam ✓ · Wingnut …Next!

P5: Hourglass sign — "PASSWORD CHANGES EVERY HOUR. LISTEN. WATCH. REMEMBER."

⭐ Act 3 opener — world-shift moment. New world, new rules.

p.31

Eavesdrop — Decode Password

Game · Full page

TODO

Busy crowd outside gate. 4 creatures each saying one word in Graffiti Rune speech bubbles. Find + decode the password.

4 words: VENOMHEEL · EGGLAYER ✅ PASSWORD · BILLZAPPER · SWEATMILK

"That's the password?!" — "Yes." — "…Aight."

p.32

Platypus Barrack — Top-Down

Splash · 2-day page

TODO

TOP-DOWN / ISOMETRIC view · Gate + queue visible · Market stalls · Inn · food court · quarters · Bluxky tiny in crowd

"The busiest place in this dimension. Some never leave."

p.33

Asking Around the Barrack

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1: Market stalls · "Do you know a Wizard? Past the swamp?"

P2: Bottle vendor: "Nobody goes past the swamp."

P3: Montage of 3 rejections · afternoon → dusk

P4: Night · Bluxky slumped on a wall · tired

P5–6: Old merchant: "Information lives where the music plays. Try the Inn." → Bluxky heads to the glowing Inn

Day fading to night = mounting failure → discovery beat.

p.34

The Inn + Meeting Jammo

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1 WIDE: Inside the Inn — crowded, loud, alive · stage in back with lone musician

P2: Bluxky overwhelmed · "Information lives here, huh."

P3: Glowing magic note drifts past · …tingle…

P4: Follow the note through the crowd to the stage

P5: Meet Jammo · "You're good." "I know."

P6: "I know him. Long overdue for a walk. Dawn."

Jammo: purple/colourful hair, mushroom cap head, guitar. He notices the glowing notes too.

p.35

Swamp Adventure — All Day Dodging

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1: Dawn · entering swamp · "I haven't been back in years."

P2: ZZZSHHH! Giant Mosquito · DODGE

P3: SNAP SNAP! Carnival Flowers · RUN!

P4: One Eye Spider · slow blink · tiptoe past

P5: Sunset · "How big is the Swamp Root?" "Bigger than this whole swamp."

P6: GRRRRRMMMM… · new shadow looms · "I did not list that one."

Three monsters, all-day dodging. Sun moves across panels — dawn → noon → afternoon → sunset → dusk.

p.36

Flee + Camp + Root Wall Reveal

Comic · 5 panels

TODO

P1: CRASH! THUD! · Fleeing the last monster

P2 WIDE: Camp fire · "Day ten. The deadline lands tonight."

P3: …tingle… A glowing note drifts past · "You hear that?"

P4: Following the sound through night swamp

P5 WIDE: ROOT WALL REVEALED — massive ancient root gate · dozens of colourful magic notes singing in chorus

⭐ "Day 10" deadline pays off here. Tension peaks before Spirit Notes game.

p.37–38

Spirit Notes Game — Dual Spread

Game · Dual spread

TODO

p.37 LEFT: Root Wall left side. 8 Spirit Notes flying, numbered 1–8. Jammo playing. Each fly has a Graffiti Rune letter on belly.

p.38 RIGHT: Root Wall right side. Remaining flies + answer boxes [ 1 ][ 2 ]…[ 8 ]. Door cracking open.

8 NOTES = BREWSTER · 🔴B · 🟠R · 🟡E · 🟢W · 🔵S · 🟣T · 💜E · 🩷R · Graffiti Rune on each fly's belly

"The notes are right. The name is right. The wall is opening."

Chapter Four

WIZARD'S LAB + FINALE

Pages 39–50 · Lab → Tether → Grand Pa Tree → Farewell → Ma Frenz → Answers → Thank You

p.39

Into the Wizard Laboratory

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1: Through wall · wild garden · house

P2: Inside — dark, cluttered lab

P3 WIDE: Bluxky lights lamp · FWOOM · lab in warmth — extraordinary details

P4: Figure on floor among pill bottles

P5–6: Brewster face-up · spiral eyes · "I am the Alchemist Wizard."

"Are you the Wizard?" · "I am the Alchemist Wizard…"

p.40

Brewster's Confession

Comic · 6 panels

TODO

P1: "I took the wrong pills."

P2: "I'm not the only Wizard." · "I make potions."

P3: "My desk." · Wide messy desk

P4: "Seven differences. Find them."

P5–6: Bluxky + Jammo lean over desk · Brewster tilts sideways · "Take your time. Turn the page."

p.41–42

Find the Difference — Brewster's Desk

Game · Dual spread

TODO

p.41 LEFT: Desk as-is (correct). Very detailed — books, potions, equipment, star charts.

p.42 RIGHT: Same desk — 7 differences to find.

1. Book "TOP 10 POTIONS NOT TO DRINK" → item #7 crossed out
2. Sticky "DO NOT DRINK THE PURPLE ONE" → "DRANK THE PURPLE ONE"
3. Frog next to beaker → frog INSIDE beaker · "FROG? STILL FROG."
4. Owl clock: 12 hours → 13 hours
5. Calendar: Day 7 circled → Day 47 circled
6. Trophy "BEST WIZARD" → "GOOD ENOUGH WIZARD"
7. Star chart constellation → same + Brewster's face drawn in crayon

"My eyes won't cooperate right now. If you can identify them, I can fix the antidote."

p.43

Yellow Circle — Tether + Path Home

Comic · 5 panels

TODO

P1: Brewster normal · "I feel OUTSTANDING!"

P2: Healing Potion for Grand Pa Tree

P3: Yellow Circles · "Not just power. A tether."

P4: CLICK. GLOW. · "When you have what you need from all the Wizards — these are the key."

P5 ⭐: Gloves glowing · "So I'm not stuck." → "No. You are anchored."

"Day 10. You made it. And now you know how this ends."

p.44

Yellow Circle — Full Splash

Splash · 2-day page

TODO

FULL PAGE. Bluxky heroic pose. Yellow circles on gloves glowing. Yellow light through the lab. Brewster in background. EPIC.

"You are not the same Bluxky who fell through a portal and landed face-first in a forest."

"Not anymore."

p.45

Grand Pa Tree Healed + The Red Spray Can

Comic · 7 panels

TODO

P1: "Told you I would." Bluxky returns

P2: Healing potion opened · glows

P3 WIDE: FZZT… BLOOM — warmth travels roots like a wave

P4: Shroomies wander away, dazed

P5: Grand Pa Tree stands tall · "Fifty years. Gone."

P6 ⭐: RED SPRAY CAN · "Brewster gave me this. Sand Wizard knows what it does." · GPT: "Listen for the silence — the desert tries to talk you out of yourself."

P7: "I know. But you will do it." · "Some things are worth hearing."

⭐ EPISODE 1 ENDING PAYOFF: Red spray can + desert warning sets up Episode 2.

p.46

Farewell Gathering + Jammo Goodbye

Comic · 7 panels

TODO

P1: Grand Pa Tree: find Yellow Bird east

P2: Blobby spinning · BRAKKO BRAKKO

P3: Floris · "It was mostly you."

P4: Chef Grub · "Still alive. Good." (sling)

P5 WIDE: Everyone together INCLUDING JAMMO with guitar — Grand Pa Tree · Floris · Blobby · Chef Grub · Miners · Rumble · Jammo · Bluxky centre

P6: Jammo goodbye · "I'm a bar musician, not an adventurer." · Fist bump · "First round's on me if you ever come back."

P7: "I'll be back." — Caption: "East. Toward the desert. Toward the Sand Wizard. Toward home."

p.47–48

MA FRENZ — Campfire + Name Game

Splash + Game · Dual spread · THE FINALE

TODO

p.47 LEFT: Night campfire. Full ensemble — Bluxky · Grand Pa Tree · Floris · Blobby · Chef Grub · Miners · Rumble · Jammo. Warm golden light. "MA FRENZ" header wild-style.

p.48 RIGHT: Same scene — blank name labels + arrows to each character. "NAME MA FRENZ!" Players fill in who's who.

Answer key: Bluxky · Floris · Blobby · Chef Grub · Dug / Pick / Nugget · Rumble · Jammo · Grand Pa Tree

⭐ FINALE — "They're your frenz now too." · "Episode Zero — Complete."

p.49

Back of Book — Answers

Reference · Full page

TODO

① p.14 Hidden Objects — 6 types · 14 items

② p.16 Recipe — FLUXXEGG → SKYSALT (8)

③ p.26 Crossword — ingredient names

④ p.28 Connect Dots — RUMBLE 🐻

⑤ p.31 Password — EGGLAYER 🥚

⑥ p.37–38 Spirit Notes — BREWSTER

⑦ p.41–42 Find Diff — 7 items

⑧ p.47–48 Ma Frenz — 8 names

"Stuck? Peek here. (But no peeking until you've tried!)"

p.50

THANK YOU + Episode 2 Teaser

Splash · Credits + teaser

TODO

"THANK YOU" wild-style header

Author note from Blux — handwritten feel

MA FRENZ — THE BACKERS list (reserved block, to be filled before print)

Episode 2 teaser inset — desert horizon · Yellow Bird · red spray can casting shadow · "EPISODE ONE — DESERT OF HOPE"

⭐ Final page. Backers list + Episode 2 hook.